Read My Essay For English Class

[ROH522155]

For English, I had to write a 200 word essay? about anything thats happened in my life. Here is what I wrote.


Is it possible for something to be destined to happen no matter what? That no matter what you do, fate is going to step in and this certain event will occur? I had never been a firm believer in this theory until one special day when in the blink of an eye, something happened that would change my life forever.
I woke up on what at first was just a normal Sunday in early Spring. It was my last day before another five days of wasting away in school and I was excited to sit around inside all day and be lazy. That is all that I ever did and I was perfectly fine with it. However, my parents informed me that my younger brother had a baseball game that day and that I had to go. I always hated going to my brother's games. They were so boring. Why did I have to go? I reluctantly got in the car and we drove off to Virginia Sports Complex. It was official. My last day of the weekend was going to be wasted watching my brother play baseball.
We arrived at the ball fields and I could not have been more annoyed. I did not want to be there. It was probably the last place in the world that I wanted to be. I pouted as I took a seat on the cold, hard bleachers. The next thing I saw rocked my world and changed my life forever.
Her name was Taylor. She had blonde hair and beautiful blue eyes. It was as if the heavens opened up, and she had descended from the skies above. She may as well have been an angel because I couldn't tell the difference. I wanted to say something to her all day but I chickened out. I was too nervous. However, one thing was for sure. I needed to start coming to these games!
A couple weekends later, the team had a tournament in Newport News. I had already had the courage to finally talk to Taylor and establish a good relationship with her. I was looking forward to a great weekend with her.
It was Saturday night at the Holiday Inn Express where the team decided to stay. The night before, Taylor and I had talked into the early hours of the morning. Now, on the next night, we were sitting on the stairs on the top floor of the hotel. Once again, we were talking for hours. They seemed like just minutes to me. But I could not wait any longer. I looked at her, stared deep into her eyes, and she stared back into mine. Then, with her hand in mine, I leaned in and kissed her for the first time. It was that moment in time when I realized that fate had brought us together. I knew that no matter what had happened leading up to that point in my life, I was always going to end up in that exact spot, and this story, our story, was destined to last a lifetime.



Well what do you think?!! ....I am pretty pleased with my work.

[George70]

I think you've written a very good essay, my friend, and I wish you only the best, especially the sincerest hope that you receive an A+.

This makes me wish to take a course over at the community college in Oak Ridge. I could probably use the class time to meet and work on good things - such as essays.

[ROH522155]

[quote name='George70' timestamp='1285039622' post='484646']
I think you've written a very good essay, my friend, and I wish you only the best, especially the sincerest hope that you receive an A+.

This makes me wish to take a course over at the community college in Oak Ridge. I could probably use the class time to meet and work on good things - such as essays.
[/quote]

Thank you very much!

[flynismo]

Nice work, especially for such a short essay.

[FerrariFan87]

Nice, dude. Congrats.

[JonM229]

Nice story, but it needs more bewbs. Teachers are looking for that kind of stuff.

[Bltravens]

[quote name='ravensorioleshoyas522155' timestamp='1285036701' post='484594']
Once again, we were talking for hours. They seemed like just minutes to me.

[/quote]
Einsteins theory of relativity right there. Also as a baseball player Im a little upset you hated going to games...but you eventually figured out why we play it...chicks in the stands lol

[ROH522155]

[quote name='Bltravens' timestamp='1285093231' post='485075']
Einsteins theory of relativity right there. Also as a baseball player Im a little upset you hated going to games...but you eventually figured out why we play it...chicks in the stands lol
[/quote]

Haha yea I love basbeall and all but I did not enjoy my brothers games. And yea its all about the chicks in the stands haha.

[ROH522155]

[quote name='JonM229' timestamp='1285093031' post='485068']
Nice story, but it needs more bewbs. Teachers are looking for that kind of stuff.
[/quote]

Haha wow. You never dissapoint Jon.

[Clutch Ravens]

[quote name='ravensorioleshoyas522155' timestamp='1285094004' post='485094']
Haha wow. You never dissapoint Jon.
[/quote]

Jon's right you know, just look at the success of "Catcher in the Rye" and "Scrotie McBoogerballs".

Seriously though, it's pretty damn good, just a tad on the soppy side.

[ooo sugahhh 52]

[quote name='Clutch Ravens' timestamp='1285095037' post='485111']
Jon's right you know, [b]just look at the success of "Catcher in the Rye" and "Scrotie McBoogerballs".
[/b]
Seriously though, it's pretty damn good, just a tad on the soppy side.
[/quote]
hahahahaha nice

[theFRANCHISE]

As an aside, I'd be careful about posting essays in text form like this; your teacher could do a Google search and easily come up with this as a result and think that it's plagiarized, not knowing that it's really you. Even worse, the text could be pulled by automated bots and placed onto other websites as dummy text, which would also come up as a search result, making it look even more plagiarized.

My recommendation for if you ever want to share anything on here that's a graded assignment is to take a screenshot of your essay (or make a pdf file, if you know how) and post it, rather than copy and paste the text.

[ROH522155]

[quote name='theFRANCHISE' timestamp='1285102891' post='485251']
As an aside, I'd be careful about posting essays in text form like this; your teacher could do a Google search and easily come up with this as a result and think that it's plagiarized, not knowing that it's really you. Even worse, the text could be pulled by automated bots and placed onto other websites as dummy text, which would also come up as a search result, making it look even more plagiarized.

My recommendation for if you ever want to share anything on here that's a graded assignment is to take a screenshot of your essay (or make a pdf file, if you know how) and post it, rather than copy and paste the text.
[/quote]

Thanks for the heads up Franchise....but actually he didn't even pick them up for a grade which was a little dissapointing.